The Key ~ Fiction in a Flash Challenge @pursoot #IARTG #ASMSG #WritingCommunity

Published on by Joan Hall

Hey, everyone. I’m excited to once again take part in Soooz Burke’s Fiction in a Flash Challenge.

The rules are simple. Write a flash fiction or non-fiction piece based on the photo prompt with a maximum of 750 words. If you’d like to participate, click here to visit Soooz’s blog. And now, here is this week’s prompt and my contribution.

The forest has always been a special place for me. As a child, I came here often. It was a place where I felt safe. Secure. At home.

I loved the sound of the wind as it whispered among the tall pines. The smell of fall as leaves crunched beneath my feet. The freshness of a spring rain. Occasionally, I would come across a raccoon foraging about. Once I even saw a bobcat, but I didn’t fear him.

The forest, along with all its inhabitants, was my friend.

It had been a long time since I’d walked here, but today I needed to clear my mind. Brandon’s sudden reappearance has left me with more questions than answers. I thought I’d closed that chapter of my life for good.

To say I’ve been happy the past two years would be a misnomer. But I coped with my loss. Realized I would never be more to him than a friend. It wasn’t like Erica would have allowed even that to continue. She’d dug her claws into him good and hard and he willingly went along.

When he showed up at the bar last night, asking for my help, I should have turned him away. But I couldn’t. He said he needed a friend. So, I foolishly allowed him to come home with me.

This morning he had questions. I had no answers.

I had questions for him. His answers were ambiguous, but he said enough for me to know he was in danger. He also told me Erica was no longer a part of his life.

“I made a mistake, Cassie. I regret ever having allowed her to destroy our friendship,” he had said.

At least he wanted our friendship back. But nothing more. Never would anything else.

But there was no time to think about that. Despite what happened in the past, I still considered him a friend. And he needed me. He’d saved my life on more than one occasion. Now, it was my time to help him.

I’m not sure what to do. We both had contacts in Woodville, but at this point, neither of us knew who to trust.

I walked along the once familiar trail, kicking pine cones as a means of working out my frustration. Better than rocks, I suppose. Booting a good-sized stone with the amount of force I used would probably result in a broken toe.

I kicked a rather large cone, revealing something metallic on the forest floor. Bending down, I discovered an old key. I couldn’t help but wonder how long it had been there or who it once belonged to. A mystery for sure.

Shrugging, I picked it up, then put it in the pocket of my jacket before walking deeper into the woods, still contemplating Brandon’s situation.

You know the answer.

But I don’t.

Yes, you do.

A memory niggled within the deep recesses of my mind. I willed it to surface.

Think, Cassie, think.

Presently, I came to the edge of a pristine stream. The crystal-clear water splashed among the rocks as it journeyed from the nearby mountains to the valley below.

If my memory was that clear. Instead, it was like a murky pond.

That’s it!

A lake. An unsolved crime. The mysterious witness who was never located.

It all ties in.

I found the key.

37 thoughts on “The Key ~ Fiction in a Flash Challenge @pursoot #IARTG #ASMSG #WritingCommunity”

  6. I’m so pleased you are developing this one further, Joan. I loved the intrigue and the clear hit of impending danger you created in very few words. I have just featured this over on the Challenge blog. Thanks for taking part again. 😊

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    1. All I had to do was close my eyes and imagine walking through the woods when I was younger. Except for the mountain stream, the setting could have been near my home.

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  8. I love your story, Joan. The inner conflict, the setting, the discovery — you made them very real. And, I love your website. It’s absolutely gorgeous. ♥

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    1. Thank you, Gwen. I usually don’t write in first person but it seemed fitting for this story. And thanks for the compliment about my website. Took me a long time to find a theme I really liked.

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  9. Oh, I like this set up, Joan. Now I want to know more. Yes, please, to a short story at least. Heck, maybe even something longer. And I especially love the mood you created, making that forest come to life as a read. Well done!! 🙂

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  10. Excellent story, Joan. I loved the sights and smells of the forest, and the mood that hung over the whole piece. I feel this has so much more potential to go further with these characters. I’m glad you’re thinking of developing it into a short story.

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    1. Thanks, Staci. I don’t usually write in first-person, but I’d like to use this as part of a longer unfinished short story. I tried rewriting that one in third person, but it didn’t seem to work.

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